Developmental and Line Editing Package
- Cass Paredes
- Sep 13, 2022
- 1 min read

$.05 per word
Do you need both developmental and line editing services? This combined editing package is the perfect way to ensure your manuscript gets the attention-to-detail that it deserves, while saving some money on developmental and line editing services. With this extensive editing package you will receive feedback and suggestions pertaining to content, plot development, character(s) development, word choice, consistency, and line and copy editing. Feedback is provided through in-line comments, corrections, and suggestions. You will also receive a 10-- 30 page editorial letter with an analysis and critique of your full manuscript. This package includes two rounds of editing.
What's included in this service?
- Manuscript critique (developmental, also called structural edit) 
- Big picture analysis 
- Character analysis 
- Plot analysis 
- Dialogue flow (critiques/ recommendations) 
- Analysis of overall story flow and structure 
- Chapter analysis (suggestions for scene sequences) 
- Line editing (focus on style) 
- Copy Editing (focus on mechanics) 
- Highlight problem sections and give suggestions to rewrite or rephrase them 
- Attention to voice (whether you write in passive or active) and maintain consistency 
- Focus on dialogue structure and formatting 
- Focus on dialogue and action tags 
- Correct errors in spelling, grammar, and punctuation 
- Help with word choice 
- Delete any unnecessary, wordy, or repetitive lines, phrases, or words 
- Standard manuscript formatting 
- Feedback through in-line comments, corrections, or suggestions 
- 10-- 30 page editorial letter with analysis and critique of full manuscript 
*** Payment plans accepted***
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